Minor text fixes - Bonus thread

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Jay Belarpin
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Re: Minor text fixes - Bonus thread

Post by Jay Belarpin » Mon Jan 30, 2017 10:03 am

Make sure that it is clearly stated that Magic is apparent when being used and that Astral Wave is also apparent.


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As all of this happened, Bill poured a drink.

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Re: Minor text fixes - Bonus thread

Post by Olive Wilson » Fri Feb 10, 2017 3:22 pm

Commas

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Re: Minor text fixes - Bonus thread

Post by Jay Belarpin » Fri Feb 10, 2017 8:00 pm

Olive Wilson wrote:Commas
When the rulebook is posted for commenting again, please comment on the offending commas or lack there of.
As all of this happened, Bill poured a drink.

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Re: Minor text fixes - Bonus thread

Post by Olive Wilson » Fri Feb 10, 2017 8:03 pm

Prepare for an essay

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Re: Minor text fixes - Bonus thread

Post by Plot » Fri Feb 10, 2017 11:41 pm

Olive Wilson wrote:Prepare for an essay
Faints

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